Kaedyn @ Parkvale
I am a Year 6 student. I am in Totara Hub.
Tuesday, August 16, 2016
Sonny Bill Williams
I have been working on my writing. My goals were punctuation and capital letters for names. I tried my personal best. I am proud of my work. Something that challenged me was finding information.
Monday, July 4, 2016
Matariki
Room 2,3 and 4 have been learning about Matariki the 7 stars.
Matariki is fun and this is what we did. I did carving I love it I wood do it agent (again). I all so did plating we have to (two) totara trees
in Parkvale school. I love matariki it is fun I would love to do it again. I have been yousing(using) my learning musll in carving it is helping with my learning. My learning musll(muscles) are notsing and perseverance. I had to watch so I could see how to use the carver. I had to persevere because it was hard to carve it out and going around the curves.
carving |
planting |
Monday, June 13, 2016
Writing
How to look after a Japanese spitz
A Japanese spitz is a type of dog and it is one of the longest living breeds. It can live up to sixteen. A Japanese spitz things it is human. They are a good guard dog. They dig holes when they are they small.
Japanese spitz are fluffy and they moult in summer when it's hot.
What you need?
- Dog brush
- Vacuum Cleaner
- Dog food
- Dog kennel
- Lead
- Collar
- Dog bowl
- Dog toys
I have a Japanese spitz his name is Spike.
(The opposite of what he is rely)
Everyday you need to...
- Feed the dog
- Brush the dog
- Walk the dog
- Play with the dog
- the dog should sleep on your bed
I Love Japanese spitz.
I am proud of this writing because I really worked my personal best on it because I think it wood help someone who gets one. I think my writing has lots of detail. Next time I wood put some more steps in.
Thursday, June 2, 2016
My art
Monday, May 30, 2016
Bossy E
I have been learning to write and read my bossy e words.
I am proud of my bossy e learning because I did my pienll (personal) best and I am notsing (noticing) the e words in books.
Monday, May 16, 2016
I am
I am…
Success Criteria
Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary
Choose the best nouns for the poem
Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns
Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you
I am Kaedyn
I wonder if i'm geting beta at leouning (learning)
I hear cheering at sport
I see houses when I am jumping on my tramp
I want harder books
I am Kaedyn
I pretend I can do my work sumtimes (sometimes)
I feel my dogs fluffy fer
I touch my acer to write
I worry about getting in trubill (trouble)
I cry when I dont no how
I am Kaedyn
I understand math
I say a leader leeds (leads) by example
I dream of video games
I try to do my personal best on my work
I hope to be a lego dsina (designer)
I am Kaedyn
I am proud of my poem because it tells all about me. I tried to use the best words. I am working on my sounds.
Monday, April 11, 2016
Kitten Writing
Zzzz!!! I was in my bed sleeping when suddenly I hored(heard) something moving through the door. “I think that's just nathink (nothing)” I said to myself.
Aaaaaaaaaa!!! I'm having a nitemer(nightmare) Aaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaa!!! Suddenly I houd(heard) the something agen(again) “it’s not nothing it’s something!!!” I said. It was like knocking knock knock. I standed up and opined(opened) the door it was brown and white and foure(fury).Meow meow meow!!! A kitten was on my bed.I went to my bed and watied for the morning. The kiten went to sleep.The kitin snuglled (snuggled) up and pered(purred) quitle(quietly) In the morning I shod(showed) my mum we fed it but then we saw a sine(sign) it seid(said) missing kitten so to then we gave it back.
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